• I think the English in this whol...

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I think the English in this whole thing needs a little work.... I'd show the mistakes to you directly, but there are quite a few..... The overall setup is good, the idea genius, but the language less so.

Created at: 2012/10/27 16:15; Updated at: 2013/09/30 13:46
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